This is my first offline edit of Data's Day but it is much to long and I will have to cut it down to a more reasonable size. The Romulan storyline will just have to go I think if we are to keep all of the other good stuff. Anyway if you have the time see what you think and any constructive comments would be welcome.
Not sure if YouTube has finished processing it yet but it's up if you want to take a look.
All the Best. DarMok.